I'll do my best to improve

I'm really sorry y'all for the massive inconsistencies, I'm still only 4 months into this posting stuff and learning a bit slow. I might not post for 5-6 days cause I will be fixing the story cards of my major scenarios. Again this is my bad for not asking for help sooner and being ignorant to some of your tips It's hypocritical of me really, asking for help when I don't even apply all of them.