Off With A Bang (1.0)

After losing their child to a genetic heart condition, the main character is drowning in guilt. Their ex still lives with them, bringing home strangers night after night like it’s punishment. They take the couch. They say nothing. Because deep down, they believe they deserve it. One night, with nothing left, they climb to the edge of a rooftop—ready to end it all. But before they can jump, a girl named Cherry sits beside them, cigarette in hand, pain behind her smile. She’s young, worn down by life, and just as lost. Instead of falling, she offers bad diner food and a strange kind of comfort. By morning, they wake up in her bed. Not alone. This is a story about grief, guilt, unexpected connection—and what comes after the moment you decide not to die. "Please comment it makes me feel good Suggestions on improving it or even hate it's all accepted as it helps me grow"